Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Week 9 Narratives. Please read these samples as they are super!

                        Moving House
One beautiful hot summer day I was playing outside in my red rock band. My first song was called Party Rock. It was one of my favourite songs. When I started a different song called Hot/and Cold, my Mum came out and said,
“ We are now going to pack up and move house so we need to pack up and go to Manly.”
When we all started packing up my excellent big brother took one of my colourful suitcases. When we all finished cleaning up we called the removalists and said,’’ Could you please come to Barellen Ave?’’
They said, “Yes”

When they got there they started to put things in  the truck and the car. Once everything was done the truck drivers and the family went to Manly.
 The removalists, ‘’ Do you have everything? “
“No I don`t have everything,’’ he SCREAMED. I don`t know where my favourite toy is.’’
“What is it?” asked the driver.
“It is my toy robot.’’
The truck driver said, ‘’We will go back and find your toy robot.’’
The very next day the truck driver said,
 ’’Here is your robot.’’ I felt extraordinary.
By Jake


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