Tuesday, August 30, 2011

Year1MJ's narratives that they wrote and typed themselves. Please read them and leave a comment.


Lost
When I was looking in the garage for my hot wheels it was missing. I was looking around for it but I did’nt see it.
I was so sad but someone found it. It was in the car I was so happy that I wanted to play with it so much. By Ashar

One day I was in a large field with my mum.
I saw a little park and I asked if could go there. My mum said,”Yes”.
In the field I lost my bike. I tried to remember where it was, but  luckily someone found it.
I was extremely happy all day long. 
By Diane
  Lost
A couple of days ago I was writing a letter to my friend. When I was not looking my brother stole my pencil.
I shouted, ‘’Where’s my pencil’’? My brother stood up said, ‘’Ne
ne n ne.’’ I chased him around  the house until I got him.
He never gave it back to me.
By Romie

 


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