Saturday, February 12, 2011

Our first Recounts! Please read them as they are so good.

Recounts of the Holidays

We wrote these recounts in our Literacy books and now they are being published!
I went to the beach and my brother and my two sisters played with me.
I had a good holiday.
by Joshua


In the holidays I painted pictures. I went to the shops and the kind of shop that I went to was Coles.
I played with Riya, I played with Diya. I also had a great Christmas. I got lots of toys. I've played with my toys. I had a nice holiday.
by Diane


In the holidays I went to the beach to have a holiday. The beach I went to was Manly Beach. While we were there we collected some shells. I had dinner at the beach. I had fun at the beach.
by Daniel
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 17, 2011 at 11:58 PM

    What a wonderful idea Mrs J. I look forward to seeing 1MJ's work.
    Mrs Z.

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 19, 2011 at 1:42 PM

    I love all the works displayed around 1MJ, particularly the acrostic poems.
    Mrs B.

    (Maybe you could also put a link to the school web site on this blog?)

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 20, 2011 at 4:01 PM

    This is a great blogspot 1MJ.
    From DZ 5/6B

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